应用文写作实践The language required in AEW is of completeness, consideration, courtesy, clearness, conciseness andcorrectness4.1 CompletenessA letter should include five parts (5 Ws): who, what, where, when and whyAnorderletter is composed of whattheconsumerwants,whenhe(she)needsthegoods,towhomandwhere the goods to be sent and how the payment will be made.4.2.ConsiderationThe writer is to showrespect to the addressee in the letterOur attitudeyour attitudeWeallow2percentdiscountforcashpaymentYou earn 2 percent discount when you pay cashWe are pleased t announce tha...You will pleased to know that...You will no doubt do it.We want you to do it.We follow this policy, because...You will benefitfromthis policy,because...4.3Courtesya.Courtesyrequirespoliteness in languageand considerationtothepartnernot courtesycourtesyYou ought to...Perhaps you could...WewarmlywelcomeyoutoNewYork.YouarewarmlywelcomeinNewYork.b. ways for courtesytheuse of"Will you please..."instead of commandthe use of subjunctive mood"We would ask you to ship the goods by the first availablevessel."the use of passive mood "A very careless mistake was made."4.4.ClearnessLetter language is required to be concise and direct.For example,the sentence is not clear enough, like" I'd like you and David to come to luncheon next Friday".Herethedateneeds to be added on. So therevision goes“I'd like you andDavid to come to luncheon nexiFriday,MaytheI',atwelve o'clock",Ina letter reply,the addresser cannot reply thisway"I'll come if I'm free"4.5ConcisenessIt's better to words,phrases, clauses, short sentences instead of phrases, sentences and long sentence.Statementsarepreferredtoquestionsnot conciseconcise...decide......cometoadecision...Will you be good enough toPlease...We express our regret at being unable to fulfill your order on this occasion. (not concise)We are sorry we cannot meet your present order.For the reason that-----because...(concise)4.6ConcretenessNo vagueness, abstract, and fuzziness are allowed in AEW.The time is to be as exact as the date, month,and year.And the product quality and feature is to be illustrated with datainconcreteconcreteThank youfor your beautiful gif------Thank you for your beautiful roses.4.7 CorrectnessThe content in the letter is to suite the fact, especially the correctness of digital numbers and trade terms.5
应用文写作实践 5 The language required in AEW is of completeness, consideration, courtesy, clearness, conciseness and correctness. 4.1 Completeness A letter should include five parts (5 Ws): who, what, where, when and why. An order letter is composed of what the consumer wants, when he (she) needs the goods, to whom and where the goods to be sent and how the payment will be made. 4.2. Consideration The writer is to show respect to the addressee in the letter. Our attitude your attitude We allow 2 percent discount for cash payment You earn 2 percent discount when you pay cash We are pleased t announce that. You will pleased to know that. We want you to do it. You will no doubt do it. We follow this policy, because. You will benefit from this policy, because. 4.3 Courtesy a. Courtesy requires politeness in language and consideration to the partner. not courtesy courtesy You ought to. Perhaps you could. We warmly welcome you to New York. You are warmly welcome in New York. b. ways for courtesy the use of “Will you please.” instead of command. the use of subjunctive mood “We would ask you to ship the goods by the first available vessel.” the use of passive mood “A very careless mistake was made.” 4.4. Clearness Letter language is required to be concise and direct. For example, the sentence is not clear enough, like “ I’d like you and David to come to luncheon next Friday”. Here the date needs to be added on. So the revision goes “I’d like you and David to come to luncheon next Friday, May the 1st, at twelve o’clock”. In a letter reply, the addresser cannot reply this way “I’ll come if I’m free”. 4.5 Conciseness It’s better to words, phrases, clauses, short sentences instead of phrases, sentences and long sentence. Statements are preferred to questions. not concise concise .come to a decision. .decide. Will you be good enough to Please. We express our regret at being unable to fulfill your order on this occasion. (not concise) We are sorry we cannot meet your present order. For the reason that-because.(concise) 4.6 Concreteness No vagueness, abstract, and fuzziness are allowed in AEW. The time is to be as exact as the date, month, and year. And the product quality and feature is to be illustrated with data. inconcrete concrete Thank you for your beautiful gift-Thank you for your beautiful roses. 4.7 Correctness The content in the letter is to suite the fact, especially the correctness of digital numbers and trade terms
外院英专For this involves in the benefits and obligations of two parties. So cross-checks are needed for thepreciseness in details. The citation of quotation is to acknowledge its source as original as possiblewithout any modification.IV. Suggestions for instructionAEW evolutionary knowledge can be appropriately introduced, and emphasis can be given to theintroduction of the classification of AEW with little involvement in the theoretical debates. Furthermore,feature introduction can be illustrated with the features of Literature works to strengthen studentsperceptual knowledge.V.Teachinghours:4class hoursDiscussion of the goals in AEW1. Discuss the nature and feature and function of AEW2.DescribeclearlytheclassificationofAEW3.MakeaplanastohowtoapplythetheoryofAEWtoyourstudyortoyourwork6
外院英专 6 For this involves in the benefits and obligations of two parties. So cross-checks are needed for the preciseness in details. The citation of quotation is to acknowledge its source as original as possible without any modification. IV. Suggestions for instruction AEW evolutionary knowledge can be appropriately introduced, and emphasis can be given to the introduction of the classification of AEW with little involvement in the theoretical debates. Furthermore, feature introduction can be illustrated with the features of Literature works to strengthen students' perceptual knowledge. V. Teaching hours: 4 class hours Discussion of the goals in AEW 1. Discuss the nature and feature and function of AEW. 2. Describe clearly the classification of AEW. 3. Make a plan as to how to apply the theory of AEW to your study or to your work
应用文写作实践ChapterTwoOfficial DocumentsI.The purpose and requirements ofAEW instructionthe mastery of accurate meanings, features, usage and basic forms of AEW writings such as documents,bulletin, notice, report, requests, letters, reply, meeting minutes; the understanding all kinds of documentclassification,andthemasteryofreportwritingandmeetingminutesTeaching hours: 4 class hoursIL.Teaching ContentsSection OneIntroduction1.1thenatureand characteristicsofofficial documents1.2 the classification of official documents1.3 the format of official documents1.4 the basic requirements of official writingBulletinsSectionTwo2.1 introduction to bulletins2.2thebasicformatofbulletins2.3 the requirements of bulletin writing2.4 bulletin samplesSection ThreeNotice3.1 introduction to notice3.2thebasicformatofnotice3.3 the writing requirements of notice3.4noticesamplesReportsSection Four4.1 introduction to reports4.2 the basic format of reports4.3 the writing requirements of reports4.4 report samples7
应用文写作实践 7 Chapter Two Official Documents I. The purpose and requirements of AEW instruction the mastery of accurate meanings, features, usage and basic forms of AEW writings such as documents, bulletin, notice, report, requests, letters, reply, meeting minutes; the understanding all kinds of document classification, and the mastery of report writing and meeting minutes Teaching hours: 4 class hours II. Teaching Contents Section One Introduction 1.1 the nature and characteristics of official documents 1.2 the classification of official documents 1.3 the format of official documents 1.4 the basic requirements of official writing Section Two Bulletins 2.1 introduction to bulletins 2.2 the basic format of bulletins 2.3 the requirements of bulletin writing 2.4 bulletin samples Section Three Notice 3.1 introduction to notice 3.2 the basic format of notice 3.3 the writing requirements of notice 3.4 notice samples Section Four Reports 4.1 introduction to reports 4.2 the basic format of reports 4.3 the writing requirements of reports 4.4 report samples
外院英专Section FiveRequests5.1introduction to requests5.2 the basic format of requests5.3thedifferencebetweenreportsandrequests5.5request samplesSection SixLetters6.1 introduction to letters6.2 the basic format of lettersABlock FormTheStoneGirls'Middle School286SmithRoadX X City, CaliforniaTheUnitedStatesofAmericaAug, 24, 1983An Indented FormClass 8003, English Faculty,Foreign Languages Dep.,Xinhua Normal UniversityHaicity, Up-North ProvincePeople's Republic of ChinaDec.18,19836.3 the requirements ofletter writing6.4 letter samplesBusiness Letter---asking tovisitanExhibition on Scientific and Technological Inventions187PeacockAvenueXX District, Shanghai CitySept. 16, 1983ReceptionOfficeExhibition Palace, ShanghaiGentlemen,We were very pleased to learn from the local newspaper that many important and valuableinventions of scienceand technology made since the Second World War are now on display in yourexhibitionhallWeall knowthat there havebeenalargenumber of scientific and technical achievements,the application of which has been greatly changing our total view of the world. The past four decades inparticular have witnessed the birth of many new theories of epoch--making significance. They deal withalmost everything in all spheres of human activities. Thanks to the selfless efforts of scientists, Chineseand overseas, man's life has been daily improving. Today, science and technology are advancing in ourcountry much more rapidly than at any time in the past. They are being applied to the needs of production8
外院英专 8 Section Five Requests 5.1 introduction to requests 5.2 the basic format of requests 5.3 the difference between reports and requests 5.5 request samples Section Six Letters 6.1 introduction to letters 6.2 the basic format of letters A Block Form The Stone Girls’ Middle School 286 Smith Road X X City, California The United States of America Aug, 24, 1983 An Indented Form Class 8003, English Faculty, Foreign Languages Dep., Xinhua Normal University Haicity, Up-North Province People’s Republic of China Dec. 18, 1983. 6.3 the requirements of letter writing 6.4 letter samples Business Letter-asking to visit an Exhibition on Scientific and Technological Inventions 187 Peacock Avenue XX District, Shanghai City Sept. 16, 1983 Reception Office Exhibition Palace, Shanghai Gentlemen, We were very pleased to learn from the local newspaper that many important and valuable inventions of science and technology made since the Second World War are now on display in your exhibition hall. We all know that there have been a large number of scientific and technical achievements, the application of which has been greatly changing our total view of the world. The past four decades in particular have witnessed the birth of many new theories of epoch-making significance. They deal with almost everything in all spheres of human activities. Thanks to the selfless efforts of scientists, Chinese and overseas, man’s life has been daily improving. Today, science and technology are advancing in our country much more rapidly than at any time in the past. They are being applied to the needs of production
应用文写作实践and life.We, young scienceworkers, intend in all eagerness to make in-depth studies of national andinternational trends of science and technology developments andkeep in pacewith the rapid progress ofsciences in various fields.To do this, it is necessary for us to get well informed of the latest results ofscientific researchesWetherebywritetoaskforachancetovisityourexhibition.Wewill verymuchappreciate it if youcan arrangefor us tocome on Sept.25,1983,next Saturday.Thank you in advance for a favourable reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours,Liu MingLi YangfangXiao YunPrivate Letter of InvitationDepartment of BiologyX X Normal UniversityMay 16, 1985Dear Mr. Wang Lin,Itgivesme much pleasure to introducetoyouthebearer of the this letter, Comrade Lin Ling,who isgoing to ask you to help her with her studies in physics and chemistry. She graduated from X X MiddleSchool last year. Always a three-good student, she shows herself upright, hardworking and intelligent.Lin's father, who specializes in biology, has been a bosom friend of mine for more than twenty years.Whatever,youdofor her will begreatlyappreciated and considered apersonal favour tomePlease accept myheartfelt thanks and withkindest regards toyou and yoursYours intimatelyTang RongSection SevenReply7.1 introduction to reply7.2 the basic format of reply7.3 the requirements of replywriting7.4reply samplesSection EightMeeting Minutes8.1 Introduction to meeting minutes8.2Thebasicformatofmeetingminutes8.3The requirements of writing meetingminutes8.4meetingminutessamplesMinutesofa Seminarof Scientists andTechniciansSeminar MinutesTime: Saturday, July 14, 1999, at 2: 30 p. m.Place:Conference hall, second floor, the Central Building of X X HotelAttending:Prof.Zhou Fang, Associate Prof. Lin Zhong.,Senior Engineers Liang Ming and Xie Feng, Engineer Ma Li and others9
应用文写作实践 9 and life. We, young science workers, intend in all eagerness to make in-depth studies of national and international trends of science and technology developments and keep in pace with the rapid progress of sciences in various fields. To do this, it is necessary for us to get well informed of the latest results of scientific researches. We thereby write to ask for a chance to visit your exhibition. We will very much appreciate it if you can arrange for us to come on Sept. 25, 1983, next Saturday. Thank you in advance for a favourable reply at your earliest convenience. Sincerely yours, Liu Ming Li Yangfang Xiao Yun Private Letter of Invitation Department of Biology X X Normal University May 16, 1985 Dear Mr. Wang Lin, It gives me much pleasure to introduce to you the bearer of the this letter, Comrade Lin Ling, who is going to ask you to help her with her studies in physics and chemistry. She graduated from X X Middle School last year. Always a three-good student, she shows herself upright, hardworking and intelligent. Lin’s father, who specializes in biology, has been a bosom friend of mine for more than twenty years. Whatever, you do for her will be greatly appreciated and considered a personal favour to me. Please accept my heartfelt thanks and with kindest regards to you and yours. Yours intimately, Tang Rong Section Seven Reply 7.1 introduction to reply 7.2 the basic format of reply 7.3 the requirements of reply writing 7.4 reply samples Section Eight Meeting Minutes 8.1 Introduction to meeting minutes 8.2 The basic format of meeting minutes 8.3 The requirements of writing meetingminutes 8.4 meeting minutes samples Minutes of a Seminar of Scientists and Technicians Seminar Minutes Time: Saturday, July 14, 1999, at 2: 30 p. m. Place: Conference hall, second floor, the Central Building of X X Hotel Attending: Prof. Zhou Fang, Associate Prof. Lin Zhong., Senior Engineers Liang Ming and Xie Feng, Engineer Ma Li and others