Green campus is a new idea. It neeaplants, flowers and trees. It mean thegood surrounding. No garbage ispermitted, and no waste could bethrow, or no noise is running :
◼ Green campus is a new idea．It neea plants，flowers and trees．It mean the good surrounding．No garbage is permitted，and no waste could be throw，or no noise is running ．
Students should make every efforts fora green campus. No job, nogain. That's you have hear. So youmay remember the charming lake,garden and street in the campus
◼ Students should make every efforts for a green campus．No job，no gain．That’s you have hear．So you may remember the charming lake， garden and street in the campus．
·点评·文章的内容混乱，无清楚的逻辑关系，存在严重的语言表述错误，语法使用混杂，难以理解全文所要表达的语义，也无法对主题进行全面的论述词数也没有达到规定的要求，所以综上所述，这是一篇完全不合格的文章
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Understanding the Scoring Guide分数要求100.5切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好分基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。85.5韧题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量分错误。72分塞本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。58.5基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有分较多的严重语言错误。49.5条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分分句子有错误，且多数为严重错误
Understanding the Scoring Guide 分数 要求 100.5 分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 85.5 分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量 错误。 72分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文 字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些 是严重错误。 58.5 分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有 较多的严重语言错误。 49.5 分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部 分句子有错误，且多数为严重错误
(8分段）CreatingaGreenCampusCreating a green did [doeslgood to both the environment andpeople who live in it.Tt will provide a more healthy and comfortableenvironment.What does a green campus mean? It must be environmnent-friendlyThecampus may look beautiful and clean.No garbage is throwneverywhere.No trees are chopped off.No dirty wateris running on[through] the campus. In order to create such a green campus,studentsaresupposedtopaymoreattentiontotheirbehaviorsFor example, they shouldgrow[ fall into] a good habit of protectingplants in the campus and collecting all the garbage that they haveused. Universities also should strength[ strengthen] the educationofhowtoprotectthe environmentand organizes[organize] avarietyofactivitiestopromptthemovement.Everyperson,everydeedwillmakeourdreamrealize[realized]
（8分段） • Creating a Green Campus • Creating a green did [does] good to both the environment and people who live in it. It will provide a more healthy and comfortable environment. • What does a green campus mean? It must be environmnent-friendly. The campus may look beautiful and clean. No garbage is thrown everywhere. No trees are chopped off. No dirty water is running on [through] the campus. In order to create such a green campus, students are supposed to pay more attention to their behaviors. For example, they should grow [ fall into ] a good habit of protecting plants in the campus and collecting all the garbage that they have used. Universities also should strength [ strengthen ] the education of how to protect the environment and organizes [ organize] a variety of activities to prompt the movement. Every person, every deed will make our dream realize [ realized]