⑧ Unity Unity of a paragraph refers to the extent to which all of the ideas contained within a given paragraph "hang together"in a way that is easy for the reader to understand. One paragraph will deal only with one main topic The beginning of a new paragraph signals that the writer is moving on to a new topic
Unity Unity of a paragraph refers to the extent to which all of the ideas contained within a given paragraph "hang together" in a way that is easy for the reader to understand. A One paragraph will deal only with one B main topic The beginning of a new paragraph signals that the writer is moving on to a new topic. C
Unity Example: "Employees'attitudes at Jonstone Electric Company should be improved.The workers do not feel that they are a working team instead of just individuals.If people felt they were a part of a team, they would not misuse the tools,or deliberately undermine the work of others.Management's attitude toward its employees should also be improved. Managers at Jonstone Electric act as though their employees are incapable of making decisions or doing their own work.Managers treat workers like objects, not human beings
Unity Example: "Employees' attitudes at Jonstone Electric Company should be improved. The workers do not feel that they are a working team instead of just individuals. If people felt they were a part of a team, they would not misuse the tools, or deliberately undermine the work of others. Management's attitude toward its employees should also be improved. Managers at Jonstone Electric act as though their employees are incapable of making decisions or doing their own work. Managers treat workers like objects, not human beings
Unity Both the employees and management in Jonstone Electric Company should improve their attitudes
Unity Both the employees and management in Jonstone Electric Company should improve their attitudes
③ Cohesion and Coherence Cohesion:pairs of sentences fitting together in the way two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle do Coherence:what all the sentences in writing add up to,or the way all the pieces in a jigsaw puzzle add up to the whole picture
Cohesion and Coherence Cohesion: pairs of sentences fitting together in the way two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle do Coherence: what all the sentences in writing add up to, or the way all the pieces in a jigsaw puzzle add up to the whole picture
Cohesion and Coherence Connection: Some astonishing questions about the nature of the universe have been raised by scientists studying black holes in space.The collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble creates a black hole.So much matter compressed into so little volume changes the fabric of space around it in puzzling ways. Some astonishing questions about the nature of the universe have been raised by scientists studying black holes in space.A black hole is created by the collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble.So much matter compressed into so little volume changes the fabric of space around it in puzzling ways
Cohesion and Coherence Connection: Some astonishing questions about the nature of the universe have been raised by scientists studying black holes in space. The collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble creates a black hole. So much matter compressed into so little volume changes the fabric of space around it in puzzling ways. Some astonishing questions about the nature of the universe have been raised by scientists studying black holes in space. A black hole is created by the collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble. So much matter compressed into so little volume changes the fabric of space around it in puzzling ways