③ Cohesion and Coherence Begin sentences with information that are familiar to your readers. End sentences with information that readers cannot anticipate
Cohesion and Coherence Begin sentences with information that are familiar to your readers. End sentences with information that readers cannot anticipate
Task:Revise these following passage Two aims-the recovery of the American economy and the modernization of America into a military power-were in the president's mind when he assumed his office.The drop in unemployment figures and inflation,and the increase in the GNP testifies to his success in the first.But our increased involvement in international conflict without any clear set of political goals indicates less success with the second.Nevertheless,increases in the military budget and a good deal of saber rattling pleased the American voter
Task: Revise these following passage Two aims—the recovery of the American economy and the modernization of America into a military power—were in the president’s mind when he assumed his office. The drop in unemployment figures and inflation, and the increase in the GNP testifies to his success in the first. But our increased involvement in international conflict without any clear set of political goals indicates less success with the second. Nevertheless, increases in the military budget and a good deal of saber rattling pleased the American voter
Task:Revise these following passage When the president assumed office,he had two aims-the recovery of the American economy and the modernization of America into a military power.He succeeded in the first as testified by the drop in unemployment figures and inflation,and the increase in the GNP.But he had less success with the second, as indicated by our increased involvement in international conflict without any clear set of political goals.Nevertheless,the American voter was pleased by vast increases in the military budget and a good deal of saber rattling
Task: Revise these following passage When the president assumed office, he had two aims—the recovery of the American economy and the modernization of America into a military power. He succeeded in the first as testified by the drop in unemployment figures and inflation, and the increase in the GNP. But he had less success with the second, as indicated by our increased involvement in international conflict without any clear set of political goals. Nevertheless, the American voter was pleased by vast increases in the military budget and a good deal of saber rattling
⑧ Essentials Repeat key words Use clear pronouns Use determiners Use transitional markers Use a transitional sentence
Essentials Repeat key words Use determiners Use a transitional sentence Use clear pronouns Use transitional markers