How to Improve: In readers' Shoes China You know your work, but not your readers o Reviewers/Readers: in the same broad area but have not worked on your problems . Define terms. write about motivation and rationales, pose potential questions and answer them yourself o What are your contributions o Show your elegance? Dont! Unless for pure math, or when you are really famous
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