(2)Structural complication The main clause of the first sentence is in active voice but the subordinate clause it contains is passive and so is the second sentence Besides the second sentence is much longer and much more complicated structurally than the first. as revealed i the grammatical analysis the two sentences are structurally complicated both at sentential and phrasal levels
(2) Structural complication： • The main clause of the first sentence is in active voice but the subordinate clause it contains is passive, and so is the second sentence. Besides, the second sentence is much longer and much more complicated structurally than the first. As revealed in the grammatical analysis, the two sentences are structurally complicated both at sentential and phrasal levels
B)Parallel structure Parallel structures are frequently used, for example, transmitted. and received veneration and over with the fondest predilection and. . with an immutable decision; more necessary as well as more dear the addition of habit to inclination, and of frequent interruption in my hea/th to the gradual waste and others
(3) Parallel structure： • Parallel structures are frequently used, for example, transmitted …and received…; veneration and love; with the fondest predilection and … with an immutable decision; more necessary as well as more dear; the addition of habit to inclination, and of frequent interruption in my health to the gradual waste, and others
()Cohesive device: In terms of cohesive device, examples can be cited as follows: parallel structures are frequently used; repetition, synonymy, substitution, ellipsis and so on are popularly employed for instance vicissitude and event, veneration and love predilection and inclination declining years, interruption in health and gradual waste are examples of synonyms or near synonyms, transmit and receive are antonyms, retreat is repeated; habit before of frequent interruption is omitted; that in the second line is used to substitute for anxiet ty etc
(4) Cohesive device： • In terms of cohesive device, examples can be cited as follows: parallel structures are frequently used; repetition, synonymy, substitution, ellipsis and so on are popularly employed, for instance, vicissitude and event; veneration and love; predilection and inclination; declining years, interruption in health and gradual waste, are examples of synonyms or near synonyms; transmit and receive are antonyms; retreat is repeated; habit before of frequent interruption is omitted; that in the second line is used to substitute for anxiety, etc
(6 Structural and lexical formality: Structurally, the selection is formal n that the two sentences are grammatically complete and free from colloquial structures, Lexically, the selection is formal in that formal Words and nominalizations are frequently employed, for example, vicissitude incident, notification transmit receive, summo门 veneration, predilection, immutable, to name only a few
(6) Structural and lexical formality： • Structurally, the selection is formal in that the two sentences are grammatically complete and free from colloquial structures. Lexically, the selection is formal in that formal words and nominalizations are frequently employed, for example, vicissitude, incident, notification, transmit, receive, summon, veneration, predilection, immutable, to name only a few