If I had known that it was the last time I would see him,I would have never let him go,and I would have begged him not to leave.I would have told him that I didn't want the guitar to stay in the corner collecting dust. He would have left anyway,I thought.He loved protecting his country,and he used to say that he did it because he wanted me to be safe. It was getting late.I stood up from the couch and headed to bed
If I had known that it was the last time I would see him,I would have never let him go,and I would have begged him not to leave.I would have told him that I didn’t want the guitar to stay in the corner collecting dust. He would have left anyway,Ithought.He loved protecting his country,and he used to say that he did it because he wanted me to be safe._________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ It was getting late.I stood up from the couch and headed to bed.________________________________________________
写作指导 本文是一篇记叙文。作者的爸爸曾答应作者教他弹吉他,但 是爸爸为了报效祖国而牺牲,爸爸的愿望永远无法实现了。 1作者的父亲是一名军人,为了报效祖国而牺牲。虽然父亲 曾经答应作者,回来之后教他弹吉他,但是这一愿望却永远无 法实现。结合故事的结尾处,作者想如果知道父亲这次回不 来的话,当时就不会让他走了。 2.结合续写第一段首句可知,作者的父亲无论如何也会离开 的,因为他那样做是为了家人和国家的安全
写 作 指 导 本文是一篇记叙文。作者的爸爸曾答应作者教他弹吉他,但 是爸爸为了报效祖国而牺牲,爸爸的愿望永远无法实现了。 1.作者的父亲是一名军人,为了报效祖国而牺牲。虽然父亲 曾经答应作者,回来之后教他弹吉他,但是这一愿望却永远无 法实现。结合故事的结尾处,作者想如果知道父亲这次回不 来的话,当时就不会让他走了。 2.结合续写第一段首句可知,作者的父亲无论如何也会离开 的,因为他那样做是为了家人和国家的安全