Comments w With the wordings reorganized. the present translation has caught the important relations as discussed above However,活动 in the last line remains incongruous in the context
Comments: With the wordings reorganized, the present translation has caught the important relations as discussed above. However, 活动in the last line remains incongruous in the context
3)Translation 3 他们认为,此项工作对帮助发展中国 家关系重大,尤其对政府和中小企业。 其他政府间的组织,尤其是世界电讯联 盟和世贸组织,正在研究电讯和电讯在 贸易中的应用,让发展中国家了解这些 进程,参与到这些进程中去,尤为重要
3) Translation 3: 他们认为，此项工作对帮助发展中国 家关系重大，尤其对政府和中小企业。 其他政府间的组织，尤其是世界电讯联 盟和世贸组织，正在研究电讯和电讯在 贸易中的应用，让发展中国家了解这些 进程，参与到这些进程中去，尤为重要
Comments w The present translation is reorganized again and to a large extent, irrespective of the original structures. Consequently, it sounds more logic, coherent, authentic and readable either locally or taking the text as a whole This example shows that English textualization much depends on grammatical patterning while Chinese textualization much depends on logic sequencing
Comments: The present translation is reorganized again, and to a large extent, irrespective of the original structures. Consequently, it sounds more logic, coherent, authentic and readable either locally or taking the text as a whole. This example shows that English textualization much depends on grammatical patterning while Chinese textualization much depends on logic sequencing
Exercise 2 The meeting considered that the recommendations made by the United Nations International Symposium on Trade Efficiency in the sector of telecommunications remain a valid basis for the continuation of intergovernmental activities in the area of the telecommunications business facilitation and trade efficiency. The experts underlined that UNC TAD should pursue its work in this area by complementing UNISTE recommendations through the consideration of a number of recent trends and events. which have been and will continue to be of critical importance for the competitiveness of enterprises, especially small and medium-sized enterprises, in the years to come
Exercise 2: The meeting considered that the recommendations made by the United Nations International Symposium on Trade Efficiency in the sector of telecommunications remain a valid basis for the continuation of intergovernmental activities in the area of the telecommunications, business facilitation and trade efficiency. The experts underlined that UNCTAD should pursue its work in this area by complementing UNISTE recommendations through the consideration of a number of recent trends and events, which have been and will continue to be of critical importance for the competitiveness of enterprises, especially small and medium-sized enterprises, in the years to come
Analysis and translation 1 Analysis of the original 豢2 Staged translation
Analysis and translation: 1 Analysis of the original 2 Staged translation