Writing-3. Peer checking and rewriting 1. Do you know the writers attitude and emotion 2. Are there any good link words or hrases of comparison 3. Are there any good phrases or sentences? 4. Are there any spelling mistakes? (Student( Times
1. Do you know the writer’s attitude and emotion? 2. Are there any good link words or phrases of comparison ? 3. Are there any good phrases or sentences? 4. Are there any spelling mistakes? Writing-3. Peer checking and rewriting
Writing-4. A sample DezhouBeijing Population|5350001391900 Income/ 7636RMB24045RMB person Education 95% 96% rate Universitie 3 59 S/colleges (Student( Times
Dezhou Beijing Population 5350000 13919000 Income/ person 7636RMB 24045RMB Education rate 95% 96% Universitie s/colleges 3 59 Writing-4. A sample
Dezhou is my hometown, which has a population of 5.35 million. while our capital Beijing has a population of 1.3919 billion. Although the people's living level has been improved, the income of each person is quite different. The income of one person in Beijing is almost times larger than that in Dezhou. (Student( Times
Dezhou is my hometown, which has a population of 5.35 million. While our capital Beijing has a population of 1.3919 billion. Although the people’s living level has been improved, the income of each person is quite different. The income of one person in Beijing is almost 3 times larger than that in Dezhou
However, money is not everything, more and more people have realized the importance of education. The education rate in the two places is almost the same. Our town begins to set up more universities and colleges, so Dezhou will become more and more prosporous. (Student( Times
However, money is not everything, more and more people have realized the importance of education. The education rate in the two places is almost the same. Our town begins to set up more universities and colleges, so Dezhou will become more and more prosporous
Cultural Corner (Student( Times
Cultural Corner