上海交通大学：《英语写作 English Writing》课程教学资源（PPT课件讲稿）Lecture 11 Sentence（2）practice

Consider: On his way back from work,he met an old neighbor,and as they had not seen each other for nearly a year,they stopped by the roadside and talked,but in a little while it began to rain,and so they had to say good- bye

v Consider: On his way back from work, he met an old neighbor, and as they had not seen each other for nearly a year, they stopped by the roadside and talked, but in a little while it began to rain, and so they had to say good- bye

Revised: On his way back from work he met an old neighbor.As they had not seen each other for nearly a year,they stopped by the roadside and talked.But in a little while,it began to rain,so they had to say good-bye

Revised: On his way back from work he met an old neighbor. As they had not seen each other for nearly a year, they stopped by the roadside and talked. But in a little while, it began to rain, so they had to say good-bye